Making ESP Rescue messages a little clearer / more personable
Posted: Tue May 28, 2019 7:45 pm
For those of us that have played a while, this suggestion won't make any difference. But for newcomers, the messages that ensue with 'ESP rescue <mssg>' are confusing.
I would recommend some clarity brought to these messages along these lines, also to de-objectify the persons being recovered.
Current : * Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of searching for something lost. *
Recommended fix:
* Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of someone searching for someone fallen. *
Current : * Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of having found something. *
Recommended : * Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of having found someone fallen and in the process of retrieving them. *
Current :
* Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of bringing new life to something that has lost it. *
Recommended :
* Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of bringing new life back to someone that has lost it. *
This last one needs the fix the most, in my opinion, as it is often used no one is willing to go into the dangerous place and even try to look in the first place:
Current : * Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of failing to find what you were searching for. *
Recommended: * Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of someone being unwilling or unable to complete the search for someone fallen. *
I would recommend some clarity brought to these messages along these lines, also to de-objectify the persons being recovered.
Current : * Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of searching for something lost. *
Recommended fix:
* Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of someone searching for someone fallen. *
Current : * Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of having found something. *
Recommended : * Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of having found someone fallen and in the process of retrieving them. *
Current :
* Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of bringing new life to something that has lost it. *
Recommended :
* Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of bringing new life back to someone that has lost it. *
This last one needs the fix the most, in my opinion, as it is often used no one is willing to go into the dangerous place and even try to look in the first place:
Current : * Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of failing to find what you were searching for. *
Recommended: * Your sense of awareness is briefly tinged with the color Sky-Blue. The sense of awareness pulses with the feeling of someone being unwilling or unable to complete the search for someone fallen. *